So when I last posted I showed my second assignment from Nathan Fowke's Pictorial Composition class, and I had received some helpful critique from Mili Fay. So in my spare time before I start on the third assignment I wanted to work on these again! (I don't want to leave these in the dust). I'm pretty happy with the changes, and perhaps my intentions for the illustrations have become clearer with the changes. For now I'll continue learning loads from this class, and maybe later revisit these with fresh eyes.